For Friday Fictioneers – Rochelle Wisoff-Fields posts a picture each week which we, the participants, are tasked to write a 100 word story about.
My story is per usual a drama much to the bane of DT². But she is still in Israel and can’t stop me.
If humor is your thing then head over to Randy’s blog. Over there it’s humor- “humor the week before, and the week before that, and the week before…” On my blog insert drama.
Photo Copyright-Roger Bultot
Mom disappeared weeks ago. Climbed into the truck of a stranger at the stop where she waitressed. Tim did all he could to feed his baby brothers. Getting in and out of dumpsters was the trick. Five year old arms could only do so much.
Sis left four years ago, must eighteen now. If they found her they’d a chance of staying together. Life had been a revolving door of momma’s mistakes and they bore the marks.
“Timmy, I’m tired” his little brother bellowed. And the baby was getting heavy.
“We’ll be safe here for the night”, he reassured.
(100 Words)
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So very sad – great story and I hope that Momma never comes back for the kids – but pray that someone else shows up to take them away from their misery. Thanks! Nan 🙂
I agree Nan! These kids deserve a break and lots of love. Sadly we live in a world that can’t always do that. But what a dream that would be.
Such a sad tale, Dana… and, not fiction for a lot of kids in the world. In the 2nd paragraph, I think you’re missing the word “be” (must be eighteen now). A touching story, well written.
Thanks Dawn. No wonder I came in at 100 words. Thanks for the edit. This is all too real for many kids in our world today.l only wish it were pure fiction.
It will be a sweet day when it is!
How sad. Dumpster diving to feed your little brothers and sister. Where’s my kleenex?
I did go for the heartstrings on this one. 🙂
OMG..how sad is that!?
It is isn’t Dawn. An unfortunate reality of too many children.
Such a heartbreaking story, brought tears to my eyes.
That is a huge compliment. Thank you.
Beautifully written!
Thank you.
How sad.. the life of children having to grow up way to early.. This could be the beginning of a story where they trace down sis and reunite without their mother.. but that would be fairy tale I guess,,,
I can assure you that is not how this story went.That would indeed be the fairy-tale. Life is a wee bit harsher in reality I fear.
It’s indeed sad. Liked your take on the prompt 🙂
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Thanks Anmol. I’ll be sure to read yours. Dana
This is heartbreaking! I love the line, “Life had been a revolving door of momma’s mistakes and they bore the marks.” So visual. Well done. You’ve made me sad, which is a compliment. One note, I think the word “have” is supposed to be after “they’d” in this line, “If they found her they’d a chance of staying together.” Unless I’m missing something, in which case ignore me. 🙂
Sounds like you’re right to me. But off course that would take me to 101 words. And since word didn’t autocorrect it I’m going to pretend I’m all good. 😉
It is a huge compliment that I made you sad. I tend to write for the heart strings and too hear I pulled one is incredible.
Thank you,
Dana
Dear Dana,
Heart breaking and too believable. I wanted to gather those three in my arms and take them home. Nicely done.
shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle,
I too want to scoop them up.
Dana
Dana, Very sad story, but reality for far too many. Well written. —Susan
Thanks Susan- It is a reality for too many children. And even sadder is a system that may not support them either. I just want to scoop them up and hold on tight.
Hi, I really like your Blog so I nominated you for the “One Lovely Blog Award” here’s my post on it http://jadiebeauty.wordpress.com/2014/08/21/one-lovely-blog-award/ 🙂
Thanks Jadie ~ I appreciate the nomination. A first for me. I’ll do my best to keep it going and make sure to check out your blog
That’s a real tear-jerker.
Thanks Sandra, I do tend to write for the heart strings. Glad you liked it.
Sorry, but I’m calling DCF right now…
Randy
this is heart breaking.
I think that is an excellent idea. I just fear they won’t be any better off. But your are right we better call. Dialing now……..
Ivy Leaf Trucking Company… sorry, wrong number 😉
(Abbott and Costello had a classic routine with Lou trying to call a local employment agency and being unable to get through while everyone else was able to make long distance call to Europe, Australia, South America without any problems)
Okay I love that you typed that. I almost did it myself in my reply to you. Seriously you make me laugh.
Sad story of life for many, homeless youngsters. Well told…
It is unfortunate this is a reality for many. Thanks Mamma
My heart aches for the children who don’t have proper caregivers. This story is well written & heavy.
I read Randy’s submission that you suggested a bit earlier today – I agree, very funny.
Thank you. It is sad when children fall away. Randy is hysterical. If you have time read a few more things. Even his reply to comments make me laugh.