Putty #fridayfictioneers via rochelle – 8/30

Time for Friday Fictioneers. This week was a challenge for me. So to refresh everyone the goal is to write a 100-word story inspired by a photo prompt provided on Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ blog. Click the link below my story to read other writer’s creations. Enjoy!

Copyright – Dawn M. Miller


Dazzling him from the first moment she’d stolen his heart. Today he’d do it. He’d muster the courage and approach her. “Excuse me” barely cleared his throat.

Leaning over the counter she languidly pointed.  His head swimming; dizzily intoxicated by her perfume. Removing the aquamarine diamond encrusted pendant he placed it about her neck. Watching it billow upon her chest silently musing these jewels pale in comparison to the sparkling brilliance of those azure eyes.

Tenderly she stroked his cheek purring “Thank you”. Turning towards the platform, Putty her only thought. Minutes passed before, wits regained, Tom realized what happened.

Word count: 100

20 thoughts on “Putty #fridayfictioneers via rochelle – 8/30

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  2. Ahh…I didn’t understand at first that he actually worked there. Wow, I can understand someone getting a little dizzy in the sight of some sparkling azure eyes, but this guy really needs a bit of a wake up call. Nice job.

    • Brown would work just as well. Tom is a slow learner. He is in hot water after the jewelry heist but I hear he has a brother.

      Thanks for reading Rochelle and providing the weekly challenge.

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